幸福得要死的外语情书

I want a boat,then we can on the river;
I want a aeroplane,then we can fly in the sky;
I want a bridge,then we can make it's name for our love
Do you hope I to do your wife?
Can you buy a big ship for our marrying?
I hope everyday is fine day,and there are some clouds in the sky ,but the sum is shining,some our boats on the river,we are walking over our loving bridge~

我想有只小船，这样我们可以漂流在小河上；
我想有只飞机，这样我们可以飞在天上；
我想有座桥，这样我们可以以我们的爱情给它取名字；
你希望我做你的妻子么？
你能为我们的婚礼买只大轮船么？
我希望每天都是晴天，天上有很多云，但是阳光灿烂，我们的小船漂在河上，我们在我们的爱之桥上漫步~~~

欢迎找错！

评论

28 楼 Morgan0916 2008-10-28  

buaawhl 写道

protti 写道

"So we can make our love [to][be] its name ."

这个听起来更通畅，更舒服。~~

Well, this version looks similar to the original one.
But that wording and phrasing tends to mislead people into omitting other words around the two core words -- "make" and "love".

引用

Loving you
is easy 'cause you're beautifull,
and making love with you is all I wanna do.
Loving you
is more then just a dream come true,
and everything that I do,
is out of loving you.
la la la la la, la la la la la....

.................

27 楼 angel_888 2008-10-28  

make our```````love;my god~~~~~~~

26 楼 yeshucheng 2008-10-28  

大家干吗活生生的改动人家的原著啊，那就不是另一半的他写的了。

注意：意境，意境

25 楼 buaawhl 2008-10-28  

不到东北不知道胆小、不到广东不知道钱少、不到北京不知道官小、不到重庆成不知道结婚太早、不到海南不知道身体不好

可以加一句，不解风情不知道结婚太早

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风情的英语

卖弄风情       coquet
卖弄风情的     coquettish
卖弄风情之女子 coquette

24 楼 huangpengxiao 2008-10-28  

庄表伟 写道

buaawhl 写道

庄表伟 写道

幸福感与语法有关吗？

楼上这些不解风情的家伙！

庄子曰
纵有万种风情,奈何家有娇妻。

家有娇妻，怎么能说是奈何呢？

因为万种风情啊。。而又家有娇妻，所以奈何奈何啊？

23 楼 庄表伟 2008-10-28  

buaawhl 写道

庄表伟 写道

幸福感与语法有关吗？

楼上这些不解风情的家伙！

庄子曰
纵有万种风情,奈何家有娇妻。

家有娇妻，怎么能说是奈何呢？

22 楼 Ashela 2008-10-28  

if u no three no four, i will give u some color to see see

21 楼 hideto 2008-10-28  

protti 写道

"So we can make our love [to][be] its name ."

这个听起来更通畅，更舒服。~~

very yellow,very brute force~

20 楼 珂儿 2008-10-28  

laiseeme 写道

http://www.tudou.com/programs/view/HDsDmwa33Vc/
大家看看这个英语  这个才叫雷人呢

太强了.

19 楼 buaawhl 2008-10-28  

庄表伟 写道

幸福感与语法有关吗？

楼上这些不解风情的家伙！

庄子曰
纵有万种风情,奈何家有娇妻。

18 楼 protti 2008-10-28  

buaawhl 写道

protti 写道

"So we can make our love [to][be] its name ."

这个听起来更通畅，更舒服。~~

Well, this version looks similar to the original one.
But that wording and phrasing tends to mislead people into omitting other words around the two core words -- "make" and "love".

May be that's true~ !o_O!
If someone think so~~that's funny~

17 楼 庄表伟 2008-10-28  

幸福感与语法有关吗？

楼上这些不解风情的家伙！

16 楼 buaawhl 2008-10-28  

protti 写道

"So we can make our love [to][be] its name ."

这个听起来更通畅，更舒服。~~

Well, this version looks similar to the original one.
But that wording and phrasing tends to mislead people into omitting other words around the two core words -- "make" and "love".

15 楼 ice.k 2008-10-28  

发春了，猫叫了，你听到了吗？

14 楼 protti 2008-10-28  

"So we can make our love [to][be] its name ."

这个听起来更通畅，更舒服。~~

13 楼 buaawhl 2008-10-28  

一杯白开水 写道

很不错的意境。

语法修正如下:

I want a boat
So we can boat in the river
I want an airplane
So we can fly in the sky
I want a bridge
So we can make its name for our love

Do you hope I be your wife?
Can you buy a big ship for our marriage?

I hope everyday is sunny day
And there are clouds in the sky
The sun is shining
Our boat is floating in the river
We are walking on our love bridge~

Great correcting and refining.

But one sentence I can not understand.

"So we can make its name for our love"

What does it mean ?

I think the sentence might means "So we can name it after our love", or "So we can make our love [to][be] its name ."

12 楼 ddandyy 2008-10-28  

怒了

人家要的是意境.................

才没管内容怎么样呢

11 楼 visoin 2008-10-28  

我看了楼主的情书 我怎么突然觉得原来我的英文还不是最烂的 起码还个垫底的 哈哈

10 楼 weiqingfei 2008-10-28  

一杯白开水 写道

很不错的意境。

语法修正如下:

I want a boat
So we can boat in the river
I want an airplane
So we can fly in the sky
I want a bridge
So we can make its name for our love

Do you hope I be your wife?
Can you buy a big ship for our marriage?

I hope everyday is sunny day
And there are clouds in the sky
The sun is shining
Our boat is floating in the river
We are walking on our love bridge~

so？？？？

9 楼 laiseeme 2008-10-28  

http://www.tudou.com/programs/view/HDsDmwa33Vc/
大家看看这个英语  这个才叫雷人呢