幸福得要死的外语情书

I want a boat,then we can on the river;
I want a aeroplane,then we can fly in the sky;
I want a bridge,then we can make it's name for our love
Do you hope I to do your wife?
Can you buy a big ship for our marrying?
I hope everyday is fine day,and there are some clouds in the sky ,but the sum is shining,some our boats on the river,we are walking over our loving bridge~

我想有只小船，这样我们可以漂流在小河上；
我想有只飞机，这样我们可以飞在天上；
我想有座桥，这样我们可以以我们的爱情给它取名字；
你希望我做你的妻子么？
你能为我们的婚礼买只大轮船么？
我希望每天都是晴天，天上有很多云，但是阳光灿烂，我们的小船漂在河上，我们在我们的爱之桥上漫步~~~

欢迎找错！

评论

8 楼 trans 2008-10-28  

一杯白开水 写道

很不错的意境。

语法修正如下:

I want a boat
So we can boat in the river
I want an airplane
So we can fly in the sky
I want a bridge
So we can make its name for our love

Do you hope I be your wife?
Can you buy a big ship for our marriage?

I hope everyday is sunny day
And there are clouds in the sky
The sun is shining
Our boat is floating in the river
We are walking on our love bridge~

这个版本不错

7 楼 一杯白开水 2008-10-28  

很不错的意境。

语法修正如下:

I want a boat
So we can boat in the river
I want an airplane
So we can fly in the sky
I want a bridge
So we can make its name for our love

Do you hope I be your wife?
Can you buy a big ship for our marriage?

I hope everyday is sunny day
And there are clouds in the sky
The sun is shining
Our boat is floating in the river
We are walking on our love bridge~

6 楼 风花雪月饼 2008-10-28  

angel_888 写道

可是我觉得很好啊，也没觉得哪里有错！~~

我觉得应该是有错误。。。
因为。。。我看懂了。。。
即使完全不懂英文的，拿个翻译软件一个单词一个单词翻译也能看懂。
我英语也很烂，所以我认为楼主写得有问题。

5 楼 seen 2008-10-28  

angel_888 写道

可是我觉得很好啊，也没觉得哪里有错！~~

哈哈哈哈 不服不行。。。你娱乐大众的能力从没让人失望过 哈哈哈哈 

4 楼 angel_888 2008-10-28  

可是我觉得很好啊，也没觉得哪里有错！~~

3 楼 laiseeme 2008-10-28  

夜深人静了 春心荡漾了
不过这英语写得

2 楼 seen 2008-10-28  

。。。楼主的英语到底是怎么学的啊？是跟日本人还是跟俄国人学的？

1 楼 hongfei3 2008-10-27  

哈哈，形式而已，只要他很爱你就够啦...