差的翻译和好的翻译

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   从上世纪七八十年代至今，互联网经历了爆炸式发展的40年。地球因为互联网似乎变小了。有了互联网人们可以足不出户地和千里之外的老朋友见面聊天，轻轻敲敲键盘就能处理银行事务，点点鼠标就可以知道几乎你想知道的任何事情。但是，就像一把双刃剑，互联网在带给人们生活便利的同时，也给人们带来困扰，学生沉迷网游，坏人利用假网站骗取银行账户密码，个人隐私因为"人肉搜索"而受到侵犯。然而我们不能就此简单的判断互联网对于我们的生活是好还是坏。互联网只是一个工具，它的好坏关键是在于使用这个工具的人是否正确的使用。建立完善的使用规则，并让人们遵循和扼守，这才是能让互联网继续造福人类的最重要的一点。 

 

 

差的翻译：

 

   In the seventy or eighty years since the last century, the Internet has experienced explosive development in 40 years. The earth because of the Internet seems to have grown smaller. With the advent of the Internet people can remain within doors and thousands of miles away to meet old friends to chat, gently knock on the keyboard can handle banking, the little mouse can know almost anything you want to know. But, like a double-edged sword, Internet brings people convenience at the same time, also bring trouble, the students addicted to online games, bad use of false websites defrauding bank account password, personal privacy because" human flesh search" violated. However, we can't simply judge the Internet for our life is good or bad. The Internet is just a tool, it is good or bad, the key is to use this tool is the correct use of the. Establish and improve the rules of use, and let people follow and hold, this is to make the Internet to continue the benefit of mankind 's most important point.

 

好的翻译：

 

   Since 1970s and 1980s,the Internet has undergone(go through/experience) 40 years of explosive development, which enables the globe to appear smaller than it was before.With the help of the Internet,people now can see and chat with their old friends from thousands of miles away without leaving their homes, manage their banking business just with a light(soft) keystroke,and know almost everything they want to know with a single click of the mouse.However,the Internet, just like a double-edged sword,while bringing convenience to people's life,has meanwhile caused people many troubles.For instance,students become addicted to network games;people with ulterior motives hack(steal) others' passwords of bank accounts by means of false websites;personal privacy is violated due to the use of Internet mass hunting.Yet we cannot afford to make a imprudent(indiscreet) judgement about whether the Internet is helpful or harmful to our life simply according to these examples above.The Internet is itself merely(only/just/nothing but) a tool,whose goodness and badness relies on whether it is used in a correct manner(way) by the person who uses it.It is the most significant to establish a perfect set of rules for use and urge people to comply with(obey/follow/observe/comform to) them so as to enable the Internet to promote the well-being of mankind.