雅思培训心得（3）写作训练

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Some people believe that it is beneficial for children to spend time on TV, video and PC games, while some hold the opposite view. Talk about these two views and give your own opinion.

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这个题应该属于 Argumentation 类型，需要 Discuss both sides and give your opinion，宜采用 3773 结构。

我的作文（百度了一些资料综合而成，不是个人真实写作水平，学习用，呵呵）

In the contemporary society, children have more choices to play than before, such as watching TV programs, browsing web videos and playing PC games. Some people claim that it's a very good way for relaxing, while others argue that it has detrimental influence on children. After pondering this question on many occasions, I think their views are both partly true.

TV and PC games can ease children’s minds after a tired busy day in school via affording them entertainment and pleasure. For children, they can receive not only enjoy themselves during the period they watch TV but also could broaden their views, get lots of knowledge they didn't know before. Moreover, many online games need teamwork which can also cultivate their interpersonal skills. Children need relax, as an old saying goes: all work and no play make jack a doll boy.

Admittedly, those ways for having fun have a good few advantages. However, its disadvantages for children can not be neglected. First of all, it does occupy children too much time. Some students are not enough old to control their behaviors. Considering it's easier to play rather than study, children often take much time on videos and games that they have no vigor and attention on their study, which is much more important for them. In addition, watching TV or playing PC games too much will harm their eyes, making most of them have had bad eyesight and have to wear glasses everyday. Lastly, keeping sitting on the chair or the sofa is not good for their physical health. Some experts point out that more sport activities contribute to children's growth and could make them stronger. So it’s better sporting outside rather than staying at home for the children.

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that provided the children could balance the entertainments to the proper position, they could live in a happy and meaningful life.